Dime Lines: Dos’e’Dos

September 21, 2007

DLDos

We laugh and joke,
she takes a bath and soaks
In my glass Captain Morgans rum and bout a half a coke

Her legs?
Defined.
strong like they trunks of oak
Im half drunk under the spell of the candle smoke

Music still low, got sportscenter on mute
She comes out in a towel **Teeth suck** Thinkin she cute

Tells me bout her day, and her girls are some nosey hoes
She silly in her towel wet eatin a box of dos e dos

Mostly those types of women are imaginary
This is the type you marry so yeah…. this is kinda scary

Scratch that very.

Next to me on the couch she drops
I rub her feet with shea butter from the Body Shop

I should probably stop, cuz her calves?
Her thighs? All of that woman packed in such a petite prize

We meet eyes, tells me don’t stop….

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  • http://www.rapturous-soul.blogspot.com Trizzy

    This was HOT…and you know it! 😀 This is my first time by…but plz believe I’ll be back!!

  • tenacious

    oooh muy caliente…..

  • http://eclectik-relaxation.com/ eclectik

    “Tells me bout her day, and her girls are some nosey hoes
    She silly in her towel wet eatin a box of dos e dos”

    I can’t believe people don’t know what dos e dos are!?

  • http://sangindiva.blogspot.com Sangindiva

    You have described a night from my head…
    you have NO IDEA!!
    *teeth suck* What “chu” know bout the Captin’?
    and body shop body butter? and how I love baths?…
    Get out of my head!!

    I may not know about dos e dos –
    but I’ll gladly learn while you massage my
    french tipped toes… 🙂

  • http://the_invisible_writer.blogspot.com/ aly cat

    ahhh then reality kicks in when babies burst into the room yellin about juice or water in a cup. LOL. (or maybe that’s just MY reality)

  • http://www.roycesdaughter.blogspot.com Roycee

    NICE!!! Love it man…keep droppin um!

  • Keli

    I like this one…but I like most if not all of them. *winks*

  • http://mentallyspeaking.blogspot.com BluJewel

    nuff said with this line…”We meet eyes, tells me don’t stop…. ”

    damn! i’m soooo feelin that…*sigh*….where’s my dollar?

  • akilah

    awwww….do i get a finders fee if i find her for you? lol…

  • http://pathsnottaken.blogsome.com Erica C.

    GOLDEN!

  • http://pathsnottaken.blogsome.com Erica C.

    TRUST!!! I know what dos e dos are. I have 3 GIRL SCOUTS!!!!

  • http://rufeelingme.blogspot.com/ Lisa

    LoL I have no idea what dos e dos are but I’m definitely feeling your poem

    My favorite line

    Mostly those types of women are imaginary
    This is the type you marry so yeah…. this is kinda scary

  • Creem

    Those types are not imaginary!

    whats wrong with you E? Shes out there. Openn ur minddd Quaid! lol

  • Ash

    What, no love for Bath and Body Works??

  • MsSepia

    I LOVE DOS E DOS and the shortbread cookies with the sayings on one side and chocolate on the other mmmmm I was a Girl Scout, GS CIT/Counsler, and Asst Troop Leader. LOL

    Body Shop my favorite place to shop ….mmm shea butter You are too good to her! LOVE THE LINES keep them coming!

  • http://www.mommylonglegs.blogspot.com wynsters the tigress

    this is a beautiful poem…

  • http://minusthebars.blogspot.com don

    Grown folk talk.

  • harriet

    shoo…this reminded me of last night with my hubby! yeah, that’s the type of girl you want to marry, for real. LOL it was tight, E. i enjoyed that one (don’t kno how i missed it before)

  • http://www.facebook.com/santana.benitez Santana Caress Benitez

    this is a good one, man! when is your book coming out?

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