Dime Lines: Windows

March 29, 2008

Eyes

The color of my birthstone,
Sagittarius
Tint sometimes varies, shade sometime various

Pools of caramel
Round like para sails
Starin’ hypnotized like rides on carousels

Windows to her soul are bronze and goldenrod
Eyes are honest no mirage or some facade

Half closed when she smiles
Matches how she styles
Tears of joy looks like sunset on the Nile

Damn it’s wild

Even in Shades, she amazes
The hue is like maize, a dusty haze with grays
Like adobe clay set ablaze in Santa Fe

Dances like Ballets,
Sun ray bouquets
Like a cinnamon soufflé
Little sprays of beige
It’s hard to paraphrase what her gaze conveys

I could stare at them for days…

The only thing I regret?
She hasn’t used those eyes to look at me yet 🙁

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Tags: Dime Lines, eclectik, Eyes, Poetry, Windows

1969

Very nice.
http://yourallwelcome.blogspot.com/ 911

I might say one of this chits to someone……….*starts copying and paste’n and printing*…..na good though…1
Keli

Ok, this is another favorite.

My favorites lines from this Dime Lines:

Half closed when she smiles
Matches how she styles
Tears of joy looks like sunset on the Nile
http://lavendersquirts.blogspot.com DivineLavender

Windows to the soul….real E Talk.
http://www.nosexindacity.blogspot.com/ Curvydva

This is incredibly sweet, deep and sincere. I think this is my fav of all your Dime Lines. Goes really nicely with the music too…
valentine

Beautiful.
Arianna

That was beautiful E…my favorite line was “It’s hard to paraphrase what her gaze conveys”.
Creem

that was hot! i happen to be a Sag.

This was my fav line:

could stare at them for days; the only thing I regret?
She hasn’t used those eyes to look at me yet .

Soon come darling, soon come.
http://mentallyspeaking.blogspot.com BluJewel

Aww! that’s a touching one…i’ve had moments like this *sigh*

loved this line too…

“could stare at them for days; the only thing I regret?
She hasn’t used those eyes to look at me yet .”

i digressed to that feeling a time or few when wondering if my dollar will ever come
http://www.renaissanceblackwoman.blogspot.com Eb

Awe E… it was so endearing and then went straight melancholy. I love it just the same though.
skoolboi_krush

Good work, brother! One day I’ll grow up and be able to write like that.
http://turquoisesha.blogspot.com Mel

Loving it.
http://www.idontknowitsjustmia.com Mia

Very Very Nice!!
wahoo4uva

Yea! A new Dime Lines! Been a while. Loved it, as usual. Nice work E.
http://myfuturerocks.blogspot.com a.tiara

“Windows to her soul are bronze and goldenrod
Eyes are honest no mirage or some facade”

Thats my favorite line. Aww great Dime lines E:-)
http://hisaurawasorange.blogspot.com The Honorable ‘Sass

Loving all this Conya Doss you got popping off here this week.

As for the poem?

Greatness. The ending was real shit.

Keep writing man and sharing.
whensorrysnotenough

nice.
Pretty Thick Chick

You’re the 1 or you are the Prototype. I so *heart* you from a distance!
http://www.karrieb.blogspot.com THE Karrie B.

pink looks great on you!

real men wear pink.

i like when u get all poetic and shit. it’s hella cute.

changes my mind about you bein’ a playa, cuz all men (to me) are playas by default.

-karrie b.
harriet

Wow, E.

“Dances like Ballets,
Sun ray bouquets
Like a cinnamon soufflé
Little sprays of beige
It’s hard to paraphrase what her gaze conveys”

Just wow. Made me appreciate being a black woman with pretty brown eyes. :o)
harriet

Wow, E.

“Dances like Ballets,
Sun ray bouquets
Like a cinnamon soufflé
Little sprays of beige
It’s hard to paraphrase what her gaze conveys”

Just wow. Made me appreciate being a black woman with pretty brown eyes. :o) Thanks!
harriet

Wow, E.

“Dances like ballets
Sun ray bouquets
Like a cinammon souffle
Little sprays of beige
It’s hard to paraphrase what her gaze conveys.”

Just…wow! Makes me feel so blessed to be a black woman with pretty brown eyes! thanks!