Heizeye&eyeamhim Pt. 2

August 11, 2007

He gives criticism that’s constructive
At work he’s productive
Stops on his way to buy a ‘just because’ gift

Funny, loves to laugh,
Keeps her in tears
But serious when needed to calm her worst fears

Career is important,
But not before home
Knows when to cuddle … when to leave her alone

The man is grown.

Not tryin’ to act Thug,
Pimp or a player
The man has layers

College graduate,
stable,
Good provider

She’s confident if they had a daughter he could guide her.

And be it a son; School him to be a man
That society owes him nothing
To go in with a plan

She like DAMN!

What I do to deserve him?
A man that’s in tune with his feelin’s and can word ’em

Attend her office parties displayin’ class and flair
Afterwards hit it from the back and pull her hair

Girlfriends get jealous and joke can she share?
‘Ya’ll make an excellent pair’, they say ‘it’s not fair!’

He’s the answer to her prayers
He’s self aware, and cares
No more despair the man’s beyond rare

She has a man, during sex he’s a beast
And he’ll sit up with her watch Golden Girls and Grease

Before she met him, thought football was lame
Now she finds herself makin’ wings before the game

She even has a team, her trash talk is mean
Best relationship ever the way they share things

Hit the mall together, he’s a shoppin’ type guy
Gives his opinion like ‘Enzo’s are fly’

…Try the BCBG’s

Lovin’ him is easy,
Never thought she asked for much
but now she feels greedy

How could she be so happy? It’s a dream, she fakin”
Cuz I hear those men are either, ugly, gay or taken

Wait.

What?!?! LOL!

  • http://www.myspace.com/lovinmy88keys Stephanie

    Love it!!!

    You’re so crazy. I’m diggin this one, though…. Funny ending.

  • http://sarccastikenterprises.com Fred Sanford

    good poem…did u come with that off the dome? if so…i might need u to hook me up with something….for the wifey…

  • nitabita

    it’s not a dream, and she’s not fakin’…
    i know one of those men. Ladies, once you run into him, you’ll never walk away. He’s out there, we’ve just gotta be still long enough for him to find us!

    e-, love your comments on Hip Candy! We won’t tell…

  • http://thetenaciousone.blogspot.com tenacious

    You are so crazy LOL, I like this one.

    And what you know about Golden Girls? Let me find out there’s some Golden Girls episodes hanging around…LOL

    Still accepting applications I see?

  • http://iniquitous1.blogspot.com/ nikki indigo

    this is great, although i can’t be amused cuz i was getting happy that some sista out there had actually found a guy like that still available in today’s dating market. now you telling me it’s all a fantasy?!? say it ain’t so!

  • http://www.hipcandy.blogspot.com Chanel

    Eclectik-

    U are extremely talented… your words paint a beautiful picture. There’s good one’s like that left out there for sure! But sorry.. mine’s already taken šŸ˜‰

  • http://eclectik-relaxation.com/ eclectik

    Then why am I still single then?

  • http://thek-spot.blogspot.com/ Keli

    e.,

    I don’t like it when I man gives me too much in the beginning, I need something to keep looking forward too! You have to keep me guessing. Part of getting to know someone is the game (such a sad reality). All I have to say is just keep being you, and you will find your soul-mate…yes, I believe in soul-mates. But if you compromise, who knows what you will end up with. Also, have you read your I can’t stand a woman…that in itself rules out many a sistah. LOL!

  • http://www.hipcandy.blogspot.com Chanel

    that is the cutest thing ever! your poems are so poetic, confident and commanding… then you go and ask, “why am I still single then?” TOO CUTE!

    You’ll find that special someone, truly you will… don’t lose faith šŸ˜‰

  • http://www.MonicaMingo.com CreoleInDC

    Simply Diva sent me. She thinks you’re HAWT. I think you’re cool as a white box fan. Thanks for the musings!

  • http://jerzeyjuryduty.blogspot.com/ jerzeygyrl

    Where is this man?
    Does he exist?
    Does he have three eyeballs or something? Sounds to perfect!
    Tell him to hit me up!

    Golden Girls was the show

  • http://eclectik-relaxation.com/ eclectik

    Wait! It’s me!!!!!

    Holup lemme count…nope 2 eyeballs even!

  • prissy

    im feeling this…

  • http://jessicasong.net jess

    the golden girls.

    yo.

  • Sonya B

    AGAIN…… Refer to the comment left in Part I.

  • Sonya B

    AGAIN……. Please refer to the comment left on Part I.

  • akilah

    It’s official……..I am in blog love with you….lol
    It’s a shame I’d rather read your blog than go out and hang with my girls……as I sit here in a cute dress and stilettos…

    thanks for the good read as usual…..

    two fingas

  • Arianna

    E, seriously tho…Y on earth r u still single??? U know exactly how to treat women and know what we wanna hear. Most men would use that skill to manipulate lotsa women (aka the Marcus Graham type)… But, I do believe youre looking 4 that 1 perfect woman. Man, u could b with so many girls, that u dont even have time to blog!
    lol, glad u dont tho šŸ™‚

  • http://eclectik-relaxation.com/ eclectik

    Arianna thanx.
    Well besides the reasons why Im single that I’ve already blogged about LOL
    Everytime I meet someone I dig, they dont want me back…I might be ugly LOL

    Glad you’re reading šŸ˜‰

  • Creem

    CUZ UR PICKY E!!!!! THE SAME WAY U WROTE ABOUT THIS PERFECT MAN, THERE IS A WOMAN WHO FITS THIS DESCRIPTION (CHANGE A FEW WORDS THO). MAKE SUM EXCEPTIONS LIKE SHE DOESNT HAVE TO EXACTLY LOOK LIKE ZOE OR HAVE HAIR HANGING ALL THE WAY DOWN TO HER BUTT. LOL US SHORT HAIRED GIRLS ROCK OUR CUTS VERY WELL! ITS NOT THE END OF THE WORLD IF SHE HAS A KID EITHER, U HAVE TO LET UR GUARD DOWN E. THEN SHE WILL COME!

    BE ON THE LOOK OUT. STOP SAYN UR UGLY. UR BLOCKN UR BLESSNS!

  • http://www.mystery2you.blogspot.com MysTery

    I have to agree with Creem!! lol
    Anyway, this is my fav poem. 4real….you should have kept goin though! lol
    She will come man, she will come. And when she does, it will ALL be worth it!!

    and the music is still jammin…. šŸ˜‰

  • http://eclectik-relaxation.com/ eclectik

    This is why I dont respond to comments…some of you I cannot joke with.

  • http://ghettoeconomics.blogspot.com Paula D.

    Ummmmm……I can’t wait to run into that!!! That was great šŸ™‚

  • http://mentallyspeaking.blogspot.com BluJewel

    lovin it!

    any man that makes refs to shoes is cool with me *wink*

  • libraluv

    instant vintage…..
    i’m lovin’ this one….!

  • libraluv

    …did i already say instant vintage!
    and who’s idea to play MIKE!
    i SO heart you right now E!

  • http://srjparks.blogspot.com Sdot

    Don’t fret.
    My comment for this one is quite short…
    Okay…HAHA…jokes on ME. Got it!

  • Riccado

    First time writer, long time reader. You definitely nailed it. Could go as far as saying phenominal.

    Love it!

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